Tuesday, 28 April 2015
29th April 2015 8CY2 FINAL PITCH
Instructions
1. Group leaders reply to this post with:
a) Name of Group
b) Name of App
c) One sentence briefly describing what the app will do
2. Every member of the class will respond with the following:
a) One strength
b) One improvement
c) Rating 3 unique and will sell 2 Okay but not really original 1 Poor needs much more thought.
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ReplyDeleteOur team is Called Choutte (Ben,Seemit,Sam)
The app is called Device Protector
The app sync's two devices and tells when someone gets the password wrong.
a) You have identified a problem
DeleteB) You Do not have a original idea because there is already a device lock if the password is wrong.
c)1 star
after seeing your presentation i think...
Deleteyou could think about the fact that it is not very original.
It was a good original idea
1/3
Strength- You will feel well protected and safe from people hacking you phone or computer.
DeleteWeakness- Phones and computers already lock you out if you get the password wrong.
1 star
I would rate this as a 1. It doesn't seem to offer anything different from built in security features which phones, tablets and computers already have. You derfinitely need to have another look at this.
Delete1. Not very original or well though over.
Delete2. Quite helpful for older family members because you would know when they were being burgled not you
3. 1/3
a) It's quite complex for an app when there are already devices to stop burglaries - and the last thing on someone's mind should be whether or not somebody wants to steal their laptop once they're already in the house. It has also been done many times in regards to the phone-finder part of your app idea.
Deleteb) What you are trying to do is quite original regarding the fact that it notifies you if somebody gets the password wrong more than twice.
c) 1/3 - A lot more thought and research needs to be put into this to make it a solid app idea, rather than just a few muddled ideas put into one.
Strength - Could help an individual.
DeleteWeakness - The phone would already do what your app is supposed to do. Not original.
Score - 1 out of 3
a) You have thought about the idea.
Deleteb) You need to identify the problems and make it more original
1/3
This app isnt addressing a very relevant or well thought over problem. Wouldnt you be more worried that your house was burgled than that someone is trying to get into your phone? Another thing is, if you sync your laptop and your phone, does that mean you carry you laptop with you everywhere you go and not your phone? I think this app has many flaws and would be very difficult to pursue without being criticized for its unoriginality.
DeleteScore; 1/3
a) You have attempted to identify a social problem
Deleteb) Just because the password is typed in wrong that does not prove it is stolen. Also how do you find the phone once you have been alerted that it is stolen?
c) 1
this is a good idea but there are many apps just like this that are just as unimportant if someone broke into your house. 1 star
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DeleteStrength- Could help people with the problem identified
DeleteWeakness- Is not original/phones already do this automatically
1/3.
strength- its a good idea and would make you feel safe
Deleteweakness- its a very unoriginal idea
1 star
Black and White apps
ReplyDeleteHomework and Revision help
Our app will help young people all over the world with homework and revision.
a) The elevator pitch has fully explained what the app can do.
Deleteb) Your idea could have been more unique
2/3
I would rate this at 2. Some very good ideas about things that you would include but am not sure how unique it is. You will have to work hard with your design.
Delete* This app would help people at school to be more organised
Deletewish: this app could have already been done.
2/3
after seeing your presentation i think...
Deleteyou could have been more original
you have identified a key problem
2/3
a) The app was well thought out.
Deleteb) Not very original as there are a couple of apps that do help with homework
c) 2 stars
good research but it is not original. 1 star.
Delete1. Not very original.. other similar apps.
Delete2. Would be useful for disorganised teenagers.
3. 1/3
Strength- alright problem to solve
DeleteWeakness-Not unique google classroom and google drive could do the same thing.
1 star
a) This app has been done so many times before. Perhaps it was the way you presented it, or it was the idea itself, but this app was presented in a manner that is incredibly similar to many other helpful homework/revision apps out there. If you want to produce a h/w app, you'll have to do a lot more research and make sure that your app is able to sell.
Deleteb) In today's society, when gadgets and apps rule over many teenager's lives, this app could potentially be useful to young people. Students would prefer to have an app on their phones or computers rather than have a planner that is essentially just a lot of bound paper.
c) 1/3 - A lot more research and originality needs to be put into this app.
a) This is a problem that needs to be solved to help the new generation
Deleteb) Perhaps add a feature that you cant get on websites that help with revision.
c)2
Strength - Very to the point - describes what the app does well.
DeleteWeakness - Not completely original.
Score - 2 out of 3
This app has many flaws. For starters, there are many apps that do the same thing as this, so how is your app different? The app would be too easy to carry out because of its unoriginality and flaws. Another thing is, this may sound quite harsh, but i find the idea behind this app very boring. I could easily come up with the ideas for this app and pursue it in as little as an hour. Score 1/3
Deletea)Charity Chums (Esther,Maya,Milly,Jodie,Flavia)
ReplyDeleteb)Charities4U
c)Our app will help you discover and donate to new and old unique charities.
1. Project your voice in presentations
Delete2. Named all problems and how we would solve them.
3. 3/3!!
a) You have thought of an original idea
Deleteb) You could search up the charities on the internet
3/3
thoughtful and inspiring but you can search online for these.
Delete3 stars
I would rate this as a 3. Your ideas are well researched and seem unique. Collecting data for the app would be achievable. On the negative side it has to be something which offers more than doing a simple Google search for a charity.
Deleteafter seeing your presentation i think...
Deletecould have included surcharging for individual charity websites and apps
It is a very good and well thought out idea
3/3
It is a very good and well thought out idea
a) A well thought out idea for an app.
Deleteb) You can just search for charities
c) 3 stars
sorry it is not an original idea so ma by you could work on making it more original
DeleteStrength- Very original and will help lots of smaller charity causes.
DeleteWeakness- People could just look up the cause they want to donate to on google.
2.5/3
a) Not been done in the way you intend to make it
Deleteb) individual charities could be found on the internet
3/3
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DeleteStrength - original app - helps you find charities or illnesses people won't know about.
DeleteWeakness - people could find these charities on the internet.
Score - 3 out of 3
a) The idea is very original and the problem in society has been identified. It is also a great app to help the less fortunate - which is a really lovely thing.
Deleteb) It might be difficult to structure the app when it comes to making it as it sounds quite complex.
c) 3/3
a) name: Splat Squad
ReplyDeleteb) Puuuurfect pets
c) our app will... be an app to help you find the perfect pet and decrease the amount of home less pets.
1. Not very original
Delete2. Maybe show specific pets that are 'just for you'
3. 2/3
strength-Well identified problem and idea
DeleteWeakness-There are already some websites that do the same thing
2 stars
Strength- Will keep lots of animals out of re-homing centers.
DeleteWeakness- Generalizing the breed (e.g- bulldog=cuddly) may lead to complications as not all animals of a breed have identical characteristics.
2.5/3
very thoughtful but it will be very hard to make. 3 stars.
DeleteI would rate this as a 3. I am not an expert but does seem a good idea as long as you are sure that there is nothing else like this on the market. It is certainly addressing a social problem.
DeleteStrength: This app would help get people the right pet for their work shifts
DeleteWeakness: Some pet websites ask what type of pet you would want.
2/3
Ian:Group leader
Delete1)SIP (Sam,Ian and Pawel)
2)Sportsly
3)Our app is going to solve problems such as:You don't know where your local sports ground is, or you don't know how far your local sports ground is from your current location and you do not know the equipment the ground has.
Caroline
DeleteStrength - the problem is obvious. The app is original.
Weakness - have specific information on each animal
Score - 3 out of 3
This is a very original and well thought out and presented idea. My only negative is that you could just research how much attention a certain breed needs on google and then go to a rescue shelter for your pet. Other than that, this app would be achievable considering the thought you have put into it but would take a lot of research to put together .
DeleteScore 2/3
a) I think you've identified the problem in society and for that, well done. The app idea itself is quite original and I can see what you're trying to achieve through making the app.
Deleteb) With that said, unfortunately I don't think your methods of helping the homeless animals is a solid idea. For example, the matching part of your app has potential to be inaccurate.
c) 2/3
1) Golden Warpigs
ReplyDelete2) Engineering Toolbox
3) Our app is an all round organiser. It will show you your jobs for the day, what you will need and how long it will take.
our group: a) 50 shades of teamwork (Ella, Lottie, Bronte, Millie) b) Interview preparations c) Our app is about the social problem, preparing for interviews - it will give u tips and guidance to help build your confidence
ReplyDeletethe group I am reviewing is: cold
ReplyDeletea) one strength: very informative b) weakness: eye contact
rating: 2
Publish here but 'preview' first ...
ReplyDelete1. Group leaders reply to this post with:
a) Name of Group
b) Name of App
c) One sentence briefly describing what the app will do
2. Every member of the class will respond with the following:
a) One strength
b) One improvement
c) Rating 3 unique and will sell 2 Okay but not really original 1 Poor needs much more thought.
Our team name is PEPO.
DeleteOur app is called Nut Translator App.
Our app translates nuts into English,French and Spanish.
Can we change our app name?
DeleteI think i is good that you have a language translator for nuts.
DeleteI think you could expand on the variety of languages.
2/3
a) El Famoso Cinco
Deleteb) U-Match
c) Our app matches your skin tone to an appropriate foundation.If you take a picture of your face, our app will give you a list of foundations. Each foundation will tell you essential information so you can choose the perfect one. It will include... the price, how good it is for your skin, a rating and much more.
a) El Famoso Cinco
Deleteb) U-Match
c) Our app matches your skin tone to an appropriate foundation.If you take a picture of your face, our app will give you a list of foundations. Each foundation will tell you essential information so you can choose the perfect one. It will include... the price, how good it is for your skin, a rating and much more.
a)Generic Code
ReplyDeleteb)Allergy Scanner
c)scan your food for any allergies you have
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