Wednesday, 6 May 2015

Final Elevator Pitch Y8 Wednesday 6th May P2 2015

Instructions

1. Group leaders reply to this post with:

a) Name of Group
b) Name of App
c) One sentence briefly describing what the app will do

2. Every member of the class will respond with the following:

a) One strength
b) One improvement
c) Rating 3 unique and will sell   2  Okay but not really original  1 Poor needs much more thought.
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37 comments:

  1. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:00

    a)Generic Code
    b)Allergy Scanner
    c)scan your food for any allergies you have

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    1. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:51

      It's a really unique and original idea and has a lot of potential.

      You need to be more confident with your sales idea as you seemed a little unsure.

      Rating: 2

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    2. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 04:45

      It is a really big problem worldwide, so I am sure lots of people would buy and use it.

      Maybe include a list of allergies as well as letting them type, because if they have more than one allergy, it may be a bit tiring and boring if you have to type them all in.

      Rating: 2-3

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    3. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 04:47

      1) Its a good idea because it could really help people as it is a big problem round the UK.
      2)It will need lot of information to work well and it will take a long time so I don't think it should be free.
      Rating: 2

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    4. Anonymous8 May 2015 at 09:41

      1. We have chosen a good app but it it going to take alot of team work to get it finished.
      2. We need to collect a lot of data .

      Rate 2

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    5. Anonymous8 May 2015 at 11:55

      I am reviewing Generic Code.

      1) I think you pitched your app well and identified a problem that effects a lot of people.

      2) Whilst doing researching for my app, I came across many apps that were almost exactly the same as yours. Are you sure you did thorough research?

      Rating) 2

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    6. Anonymous13 May 2015 at 08:32

      did you do enough research
      and if you did. We came up with the idea but we thought it was to complain. so how many other people thought about it and quit it or went through with it.

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    7. Anonymous13 May 2015 at 12:53

      1-2

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  2. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:00

    a) El Famoso Cinco

    b) U-Match

    c) Our app matches your skin tone to an appropriate foundation.If you take a picture of your face, our app will give you a list of foundations. Each foundation will tell you essential information so you can choose the perfect one. It will include... the price, how good it is for your skin, a rating and much more.

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    1. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:52

      I really liked this idea. It is original and useful for girls to use.

      I don't really feel like there is much to improve - you sold it to us really well.

      Rating: 3

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    2. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 04:48

      I think our 'Pitch' went well. I am happy with the app idea although it is going to be a lot of hard work!!

      I think we need to think about how we are going to match the foundations to the true skin colour which they have.

      Rating:2.5

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    3. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 04:50

      I think our app idea is original and could really help people. I think a simpler way of making it could be better and easier to understand. So it needs more thought.
      Rating :2

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    4. Anonymous7 May 2015 at 11:03

      1.) i think this app has some real potential and could sell very much to women, and could sell world wide.
      2.) it will be hard to get all the information
      rating: 2

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    5. Anonymous8 May 2015 at 12:04

      I am reviewing El Famoso Cinco.

      1) Your idea is original and I have never seen an app like it. You have obviously thought the details through thoroughly.

      2) It does sound very complicated, and it will require a lot of data and time. So do you really want it to be free? You should maybe re-think that?

      3) 2

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    6. Anonymous13 May 2015 at 12:43

      I think it is a brilliant money maker. I think it is the best app but you still could use a colour wheel.

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    7. Anonymous13 May 2015 at 12:53

      3

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  3. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:01

    Our group name is PEPO.
    The name of our app is nutty.
    Our app will scan a forien food packet and tell you if it contains nuts. Our app focuses on three countries Spain, England and France

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    1. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:53

      I thought our idea was relatively good and I was really happy with the way to sold the pitch to everyone.

      We needed to be a bit more confident when we said it though.

      Rating: 2.5

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    2. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 04:51

      I think your idea is really good, as lots and lots of people have nut allergies, I bet it will sell really well!!

      I don't think there are any problems, if there are I can't think of them at the moment!

      Rating: 3

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    3. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 04:53

      1)This app idea was great! It sounds easy to use,effective and could really help people and is a common problem. You thought through every thing.
      2)There are similar apps.
      Rating:3

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    4. Anonymous8 May 2015 at 09:51

      I thing your app will go world wide.

      There isn't much else to say.

      3

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    5. Anonymous8 May 2015 at 12:15

      I am replying to my group PEPO.

      1) I think our pitch went well and we really sold our app to the audience and they thought our app was a good idea.

      2) I think we need to make our app even more original as there are similar apps that cope with nut allergies and we need to make ours unique and completely individual compared to the other apps on the market.

      3) 2

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    6. Anonymous13 May 2015 at 12:51

      I like it how you reach the app idea. useful app i can see how it will sell you don`t have to but you could do it on slides

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    7. Anonymous13 May 2015 at 12:54

      3-2

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  4. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:03

    TEAM name : chazzers, josh, sol, and keiran
    a Builder app to communicate with a costumer

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    1. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:54

      You sold it really well and you had the audience's attention the whole time.

      Sadly, I don't feel like your idea is the best idea. It is original but I don't think it would sell well whatsoever.

      Rating: 1

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    2. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 04:56

      I think your 'Pitch' went really well, and you sold it to everyone.

      I think that the idea is a very successful one, but I think that there would be a few problems, and it might not be very popular.

      Rating: 1.5-2

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    3. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 04:58

      1) It has not been done before and it could help people if they are building a holiday house and they don't speak the language.
      2) You would have to make the languages make sense and it could go wrong if you don't.
      Ratings:2

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    4. Anonymous8 May 2015 at 09:53

      I think you sold you idea to every =one.

      But you need to make sure the language isn't to complicated.

      1

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    5. Anonymous8 May 2015 at 12:26

      I am replying to Chazzers.

      1) Your idea is completely original, there is no other app on the market like it.

      2) It's seems to be a bit complicated to me. It seems like you have thought of the basic idea just haven't filled in the details. However with a bit more development I think your app could have real potential.

      3) 2

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    6. Anonymous13 May 2015 at 13:00

      I liked are pich when it is quite a hard app to sell. Next time i think we will need to proof read it so it does not say all the languages in the world (roughly 6,500). 1-2

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  5. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:12

    https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1pkVwvzv-vYf2YFTqJKpc2LHdh4OnM9JdlLt9zpQDnoQ/edit#slide=id.g9cacd810c_0_17

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  6. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:19

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pQNu69ZV2LiunyURenddvpnr5Y-UEQKjL-ImLkWi1g0/edit

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  7. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:31

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ibp7WFWI7vAQ5zrFw_GOmjoS1Dexo5YF0OS3ZnaNEcY/edit

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  8. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 02:31

    https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1axJxc-jgRH4bYniMGm9Vbx0E2nUlgJeUJI62RY_P9kU/edit#slide=id.g9cc857c41_1_0

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  9. Anonymous12 May 2015 at 04:45

    generic code - well presented
    - well thought through
    - research any other apps similar
    2/3

    el famoso cinco - original
    - well thought through
    -sexist? only for girls
    - 2/3

    chazzers - original
    - well planned
    - too complicated?
    - 2/3 again

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  10. Anonymous14 May 2015 at 08:41

    el famoso cinco
    lots of info
    unorganised
    2/3

    pepo
    covered everything
    might have been done before
    3/3

    chazzers
    covered a lot
    too mant laguages?

    generic code
    organised
    might have been done before
    2/3

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