Tuesday, 28 April 2015

April 29th P3 9CY2 Final Pitch

Instructions

1. Group leaders reply to this post with:

a) Name of Group
b) Name of App
c) One sentence briefly describing what the app will do

2. Every member of the class will respond with the following:

a) One strength
b) One improvement
c) Rating 3 unique and will sell   2  Okay but not really original  1 Poor needs much more thought.
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72 comments:

  1. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 03:51

    Name of the Group: BAM
    Name of the App: BAM Martial Arts

    Our app will help people learn, perform and understand martial arts language.

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    1. Mr T28 April 2015 at 04:27

      I would rate this as a 2. You have come up with some good ideas but you need to be very specific in the focus of the app.

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    2. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:27

      Strength: Good idea appealing.
      Weakness: Bad presentation and some lack of info.
      Rating: 2

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    3. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:28

      unique idea
      someone could get injured
      2 stars

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    4. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:29

      I would rate this a 2 because the idea is unique but you need to provide more information.

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    5. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:29

      its a unique app
      some safety issues
      i rate this 2 stars

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    6. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:29

      i would rate this **. you have come up with something new, but think about how safe this would be in a small home

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    7. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:29

      star=unique idea
      wish=find way of finding data
      rating=2

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    8. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:30

      strength- well researched
      weakness-other apps are similar
      rating: **

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    9. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:30

      strength; more specific
      weakness; not original
      2 stars

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    10. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      its different
      health and safety

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    11. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      The app is good because it will help you in between each lesson or help you if you missed a lesson.

      A weakness in this idea is some of the key features are already included in other apps. For example, my Karate Group already has an app quite similar to yours.

      i would rate this 2 stars

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    12. Unknown28 April 2015 at 09:24

      Good: can help people start a new hobby.
      Improve: Think about health and safety, if this is being used at home.
      rating: 2

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    13. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 13:56

      strength: will help a lot of people because a lot of people struggle with this.
      weakness: make it more clear about what it's going to do.
      rating: 2

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    14. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 00:20

      I think that this is a good app and it would sell well. It needs more unique selling points though.

      Rating: 2

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    15. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 03:27

      good idea but is someone would get hurt usiong the app you would get sewed

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    16. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 03:30

      good ideas but so many other options
      2 stars

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    17. Anonymous12 May 2015 at 00:12

      good idea
      bad presentation
      2 stars

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  2. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 03:52

    Name of Group; LCK (Laura, Cassie and Katy)
    Name of App; School Life
    Our app helps new pupils and new teachers in a new environment, as a new school can be overwhelming for adults and children.

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    1. Mr T28 April 2015 at 04:28

      I would rate this as a 2. You have certainly tried to address a social problem. However, just how unique is this. You might want to consider an app focusing on one school such as a Gillotts app.

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    2. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:29

      I would rate this at a 1 and a half. It is a good idea but extremely complicated and needs a lot of data

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    3. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:29

      Strength: A new idea that will help people with their children
      Weakness: Presentation improvement
      Rating: 2

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    4. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:30

      I would rate this a 2 because the problem is a very popular one but in some cases it might be useless.

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    5. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:30

      star=potential in idea
      wish=data will be hard to get hold of
      rating=2

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    6. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      i would rate this 2 stars because it is a good idea but i think you need to think about what would happen if someone got hurt and pressed charges

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    7. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      hasnt been used before
      might be hard to use
      **

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    8. Unknown28 April 2015 at 09:27

      good: unique, helps people stay organised at school and when they join somewhere new.
      improve: will need a lot of data for every school.
      rating: 2

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    9. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 14:00

      strength: this will really help new people
      weakness: although it is good, not many people will use it and also if they do they will only use it until they know their way round; which will only be for a little while. Also not many schools allow phones out, also this will require a lot of data.
      rating: 2

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    10. Anonymous4 May 2015 at 09:44

      Strength: This app would be very useful with helping new students

      Weakness: Many schools don't allow phones out during school time and another weakness is that it would take so much time to create the app because you would have to include so much data for each school and if would be sold worldwide, that would be a bigger problem.

      Rating: 2 stars

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    11. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 00:22

      The concept has been done before by things such as Google Tasks, Google Keep and Tasker. However, I don't believe that the exact situation you stated has beem covered by any large applications.
      Rating: 2

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    12. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 03:28

      itys a good idea because it is new i would rate it a 2

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  3. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 03:53

    Nmae of group: Wigeojaphinah
    name of app: icatchup
    Our app is designed to help students who have missed lessons communicate with their teachers.

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    1. Mr T28 April 2015 at 04:29

      I would rate this as a 2. I am worried that this type of app isn't unique enough.

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    2. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:29

      well thought out
      but already done
      1 star

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    3. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:30

      well researched
      aldready an app like this
      rating-**

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    4. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      Strength: well planned out
      Weakness: It's done already
      Rating:2

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    5. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      star=good presentation
      wish=make unique
      2

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    6. Unknown28 April 2015 at 09:31

      good: Helps student catchup with work
      improve: not very original. You could just check with teachers at school.
      rating: 1&1/2

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    7. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 14:07

      strength: this will really help people especially if they miss a lot of school.
      weakness:not a lot of people might use it. Also might have already been done.
      rating: 2

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    8. Anonymous30 April 2015 at 02:33

      strength; it will really help people when they miss school but not alot of people might not want to use it

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    9. Anonymous4 May 2015 at 08:09

      I would give this a 2 because it would be useful but it wasn't very well thought through.

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    10. Anonymous4 May 2015 at 09:47

      Strength: This app would be useful and would help students catch up with work

      Weakness: It may not be used and it's already been done

      Rating: 1 and a half

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    11. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 00:24

      This is good in concept but questions are raised about how the application will be created. Will schools need to create separate accounts for ths students? Will the accounts have passwords?
      Rating: 2

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    12. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 03:31

      this is my group but we should do more research in how to make them better

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  4. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 03:54

    The name of our Group: AppLes
    The name of the App is: Activity Search

    Our app is designed to list different activities for young children/toddlers to do when they are bored. This will trigger their imagination and creativity skills. This will result in them stopping from watching any computer or TV screens.

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    1. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:26

      To make it clear the app is NOT a game.

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    2. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:29

      make it clear the app is to find activities off a screen and not a game

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    3. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:30

      Really good idea and nothing else like it already. Uses electronics to keep people off electronics though. 3 stars

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    4. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:30

      unique app
      you didn't explain it fully so people got confused
      2 stars

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    5. Mr T28 April 2015 at 04:30

      I would rate this as a 3. You have certainly addressed a social need. You might want to think about how a parent or guardian would use the app.

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    6. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      3 stars because its a really good idea but it was a bit complicated.

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    7. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      i would rate it 1 and 1/2 because you did not address properly because we all got the wrong impression

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    8. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      strength- good idea
      weakness- more research rating - **

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    9. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 14:09

      I think we as a group need to make sure that people know it is NOT a game app it is to find activities off the phone/computer screens.

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    10. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 03:26

      Strength:good idea
      Weakness:More research
      Rating:2

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    11. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 03:29

      its a new idea so i would rate it a 3 and i think that it could work if you madre a few changes

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  5. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 03:55

    Name of Group: BaconDev

    Name of App: Event Finder

    Description: The app will assist in planning and going to conventions. It will also help organizers advertise their event.

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    1. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      Not very original things like ticket master are already done. But know what they are doing in terms of computing and how it will be made. 1 star

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    2. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      well thought out
      not enough research
      2 stars

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    3. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      good: advertises small festivals.
      improve: not unique. people wouldn't want to go to small festivals when big ones are being advertised too.
      rating: 1

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    4. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      strength- well tought out, thought about the data
      weakness- already done
      rating- **

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    5. Mr T28 April 2015 at 04:31

      I would rate this as a 2. To me this doesn't address a social problem. It seems to be a commercial app. A good idea though!

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    6. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:31

      One Strength: Well thought-out
      One Improvement: Not enough research
      Rating:2

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    7. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 15:23

      strength: this app will help people find events they want to go to.
      weakness: there are already apps a lot like this, also this app is encouraging a lot of bad behaviour. This app will also require a lot of data.
      rating: 1

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    8. Anonymous4 May 2015 at 08:10

      I would rate this a 1 because its a good idea but not unique.

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    9. Anonymous4 May 2015 at 09:52

      Strength: Will help advertise different festivals/events

      Weakness: There are already so many apps like yours already existing and this app would need a lot of research and data.

      Rating: 1

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    10. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 00:27

      This exact thing has been done before by TicketMaster and recieved 100,000 installs. Good in concept, already been done.
      Rating: 1.5

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    11. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 03:30

      i would rate this a 1 because i think that it hasnt been thought through as there are so many apps like this and i dont think that this competes

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  6. Anonymous28 April 2015 at 04:30

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  7. Anonymous1 May 2015 at 06:27

    Team Name: Centurion
    App Name: Pick a Pal
    Our app is a social media app based on Facebook where people can book a lift with friends who they have on the app.

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    1. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 00:29

      Elevators don't need booking. Rating: 1

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    2. Anonymous5 May 2015 at 03:27

      Strength: New improved idea
      Weakness: How are you going to make money
      Rating 2

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