Wednesday, 29 April 2015

Wednesday 29th April P2 Y9 Final Elevator Pitch

Instructions

1. Group leaders reply to this post with:

a) Name of Group
b) Name of App
c) One sentence briefly describing what the app will do

2. Every member of the class will respond with the following:

a) One strength
b) One improvement
c) Rating 3 unique and will sell   2  Okay but not really original  1 Poor needs much more thought.
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66 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:00

    a) Hudec's Army
    b) Boredom
    c) This app will give you random ideas of what to do.

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    1. Mr T29 April 2015 at 02:37

      I would rate this as a 3. While originally I though you had missed the point this is a very clever and simple idea which does address a social problem.

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    2. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:39

      I would rate this 3 because the app is suitable for anybody who gets bored and its simple and easy to use

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    3. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:41

      i would rate this a 3 as its unique and and suitable for everyone

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    4. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:41

      i would rate this a 3 because you really thought about it however you did not come up with a logo

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    5. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:41

      i would rate this a 3 as its unique and and suitable for everyone

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    6. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:42

      WWW- Good explanation of app and included statistics

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    7. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:42

      i would rate it a 3 because its suitable for most viewers and could go far. your presentation was clear and looks like you've thought about it a lot

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    8. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:43

      your price was reasonable (69p) but there where a few problems. Other apps similar to this idea already exist but for those apps you need WiFi like pinterest but you have thought around that and your app doesn't depend on WiFi. You described the app well but you could go onto creating a logo. This is a good idea as many people can relate to the problem you are trying to solve. I have given you a 2.5.

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    9. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:43

      i thought you speech was good and very confident but you didnt think your app through that much as you didnt tell us who your target audince was, about your logo and why your app is different in the market etc. but overall i would give you a 2.8!

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    10. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:43

      I would rate this a 3 because you've researched facts and figures but there wasn't much teamwork in the pitch.

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    11. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:43

      I would rate this a 3 because you've researched facts and figures but there wasn't much teamwork in the pitch.

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    12. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:43

      i would rate this a 3. Explained what happens well. A good useful app.

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    13. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      3 they explained what the app does clearly and how ith works but could include a logo

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    14. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:56

      I would rate them a 2 because there are apps like it but it is simple and clear and explained well

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    15. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 08:17

      I would rate you a 3 because it was explained well and in depth-used statistics(37%).

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  2. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:02

    a) hair helpers
    b) unhealthy hair
    c) we turn unhealthy hair into healthy hair, no more grease,split ends ect and how about a hair flick

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    1. Mr T29 April 2015 at 02:39

      I would rate this as a 3. I think there is much more work to do here but a splendid presentation. Also, very good justification and analysis of the problem.

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    2. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:39

      you have put alot of effort in and thought about it well

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    3. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:40

      I rate the app 3 because you have explained it very well and created many ideas for the app

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    4. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:41

      WWW- Really good presentation and a good logo design.

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    5. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:41

      I would rate this 3 as you have made it clear and simple to use.

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    6. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:42

      i would rate us a 2.5 because it was a bit messy

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    7. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      could have been better

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    8. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      i would rate this a 3 as it is a well tought out app

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    9. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      i would rate us a 3 because we had a good presentation and good app ideas but didn't really know what we were doing

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    10. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      i would rate this a 3 as it was a really good presentation and you've thought a lot about it

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    11. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      put a lot of effort in it and good research
      2.5/3

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    12. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:45

      i would rate this 2.5 as you have thought about the medical problems and worked around them but should ask for professional advice. Make the presentation flow better

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    13. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 03:02

      you have a good and different idea. it is clear and easy to understand

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    14. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 08:19

      I would give you a 2 because it was well thought through and you had a good design of the logo but your presentation was messy.

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  3. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:03

    K.A.M.T.T
    Clear Coverage
    This app provides professional advice on how to do your makeup and boost your self esteem.

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    1. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:40

      i think that you've given it some thought and researched about it and could go far

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    2. Mr T29 April 2015 at 02:41

      I would rate this as a 3. You have clearly thought about this in some detail and maybe you have identified a quite unique idea. I would suggest that we look at how we can get you some expert advice when it comes to construction.

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    3. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:41

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    4. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:42

      your group has suggested ways to help others im going to give a 2

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    5. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:42

      Good idea. I would rate it 3 as you have made it easy to use.

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    6. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:42

      youve done good research and theres no app like this so i think its a good idea

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    7. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:43

      i would rate you a 2.5 because it was a good idea just presented a bit messy

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    8. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      good idea and good research and some good facts
      2/3

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    9. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      i think your app is very clever and is useful for girls our age! you thought it through alot but got a but confusing towards the end but overall i would give you a 2.5!

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    10. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      WWW - included statistics and it is an original idea. EBI - We went into more detail about what it is.

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    11. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:45

      i think the presentation got a bit muddly

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    12. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:52

      i would rate it a 2 because it was a good idea and you've done research but it got a bit confusing.

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    13. Anonymous3 May 2015 at 08:32

      2 as the presentation was not as clear as it could be, WWW- unique idea

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    14. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 08:15

      I would give us a 2.5 because we used statistics and good facts but the presentation was messy.

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  4. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:06

    a) HHHE
    b) GO - (general organizer)
    c) our app help organizing you. it reminds you when you have an important event is going to happen and suggests ways to help eg, exams and suggests ways to revise.

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    1. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:38

      i think its a good idea, you've worked hard and thought about it clearly,i give you a 2

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    2. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:41

      i think its a good idea and you thought about it well so 2/3

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    3. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:42

      Great app. Unique and easy to use. I would rate 3.

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    4. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:43

      WWW - Clearly told what the app does and how it works and included a target audience

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    5. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:43

      a bit confusing
      you have put a lot of effort in to it and could go well
      2/3

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    6. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:43

      our app has lots of ways to help people by suggesting different tips and getting your reminders down 3

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    7. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:43

      this is a really good unique idea that you've thought hard about so 2/3

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    8. Mr T29 April 2015 at 02:43

      I would rate this as a 2. You have clearly thought about it some length. Unfortunately I think it would require masses of data to put it together. You might want to rethink how it is designed.

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    9. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      I would rate you a 3 because it was a good idea and was presented well and you had created your own logo by hand

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    10. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      our app has lots of ways to help people by suggesting different tips and getting your reminders down 3

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    11. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:44

      your app was a bit confusing but your speech was clear and confident i would give you a 2.5!

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    12. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 02:55

      your app is a good idea but you should of put more thought since there are only a few events which your app would come in useful.

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    13. Anonymous29 April 2015 at 03:07

      you have worked around a problem and it is a good idea but there would be a lot of data being used

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    14. Anonymous3 May 2015 at 08:34

      2 as it was presented clearly. To improve you should re think how you can collect all the data

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    15. Anonymous6 May 2015 at 08:22

      I would give you a 2 because it was well explained and you showed you logo but you didn't show any research.

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  5. Anonymous1 May 2015 at 06:03

    I would give this app a 2 as it could save a lot of time for people but it needs to be made more original as there are already more apps like it.:)

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  6. Anonymous1 May 2015 at 06:03

    1. Olivia, Isobel, Izzie, Jack Se
    2. Skin care
    3. Our app is a skin care app it shows tips and also gives examples of products .

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  7. Anonymous1 May 2015 at 06:09

    1.BMJT
    2.Living the Healthy Life
    3.This app gives you tips and advice on how to live a healthy lifestyle.

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  8. keremozgu1 May 2015 at 06:18

    a) o.w.a.c.n
    b) HT timetable
    c) A timetable that helps you to organize your homework and daily life.

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